T here wasn't really much to talk about in chapter 3, to be honest. i mean it's mostly about the life that Alice has been forced to leave behind. that must really suck..i can't begin to imagine never having a normal school life. how she's become something of a school legend for her in-and-out of school routine and make fun out of it by bumping into her. what a fricking pain in the ass!
anyway i sort of took you all through this little guilt trip in chapter four. one reviewer commented that she really felt as if she were going through what alice was going through (THAT made me happy). so i tried to describe alice's ongoing guilt trip as best as i could from all perspectives. alice's, her friends, those faceless students around her, and jasper too. yknow how nothing seems to bother you anymore except that main problem. eventually all the stress drives her blood pressure up and her heart gives out on her. Listening to Linkin Park and 3 Days Grace really helped me write this chapter. Songs like Drown and By Myself are depressing.
writing about edward was fun too. lol showing him making the mistakes of a newbie vampire and hinting at his ability to read minds was a total kick! also mentioned how carlisle remembered about esme (notice how he stared at the tree a little too long...he treated esme as a young woman when she fell out of a tree).
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