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Monday, May 21, 2007

St0ry FinisheD!!-->

Well it looks like that's it for Moonlight Melody! It was really a lot of fun writing this story!!!! I loved it. I loved twisting up this story around and adding my own little quirks. I know that i confused a lot of you. it made the ride so much more fun.

Now that you know how the story ended you can see the connections that I made to the real story, right? I had a couple of people who guessed how the story might possibly end. I don’t think anyone guess right but it’s good fun to see how close you might have gotten. I even threw in the old doctor that should have changed Alice in the real story. Only he didn’t really like Alice as much as the book said he did lol. So these are all my little twists. For more of these twists check out the link to an earlier post in the blog that i added around April and updated today: HERE!



I’m very happy with how the story finished. It was so great to finally write those last few lines where Edward told Bella no…again. Lol I don’t really have much to say except that I’m glad to see it finished. I’m so grateful to all the readers who reviewed and gave me their honest input on the chapters and the story as a whole. My favorite compliments were probably the ones that said the story was original LOL. Thanks so much XD I hope that we’ll get to see a lot of stories from Twilight that aren’t so to-the-fact with the book. It makes things a lot more fun as long as you get to see your favorite couple together. Heartheartheart more JasperxAlice!!!!! Thank you very much for reading Moonlight Melody and especially for reviewing. I hope you'll continue to enjoy any other stories that i might write in the Twilight section.

P.S:
As for any OTHER Twilight stories I might write I know some people have asked me and for a few I don't know how to get in touch with them so I have to write the answer to their question here XD The EmmettxRosalie thing...its still in my head and God its a wonderful idea. I would have a lot of fun writing that one hehehe. I've already tried putting together everything and the only problem is I'm having a lot of trouble lol. That and the fact that since Moonlight Melody is done I don't feel a lot like writing another vampire fic at the moment >_< . Ahhh no guarantees for the EmmettxRosalie story yet. Probably when I get a head start I'll put something up. Just that the idea is definitely out there! I've learned the hard way to not give promises lol.

Monday, April 16, 2007

Edw@rd CuLLen-->

I've been asked by quite a few people, okay so what happened to Edward after this if Alice never saw him so happy again? What changed Edward so drastically that made him like we first see him in Twilight?

Honestly, I don't really know all the details and I'm not into writing a whole new fic about it >_< They had truly developed a bond as brother and sister. It shows in every way even AFTER Edward becomes so withdrawn the way he is in the book. You see it in the way that Alice and Edward work together to take care of Jasper. It shows the way that Alice comes back for Bella, and even in the way that they argue together in the car after their first encounter with James. There's just such an open and close connection between them.So after he left he really missed her, and the frustration that they had to leave her just boiled up inside him. Along with other ideas.

See, when Alice first saw Edward he was pretty much a fresh vampire as far as experiences with others go. It had already been two years since he'd been changed and he hadn't gone out too much before this. Coming into contact with Jasper, a vampire who was so tortured with himself and his life...someone who was looking for more, was a new experience for him and opened his mind so many other possibilities and questions that he had never thought of asking himself before. What was he meant to be? Why
couldn't he drink human blood? What was out there that he didn't know about? Why was he here? Was there still a God for someone like him? Could he be saved? If his existance were ended, would he be able to go to Heaven like humans could? (lol yea the religion question really bugged him the most >_<) Being with Alice distracted and delayed him from seeking these answers out because he cherished and loved his new connection with her. When forced to leave her the questions burned stronger in the back of his mind until finally, he couldn't take it anymore. He turned to Carlisle for answers but what Carlisle told him didn't satisfy him and the two got into an argument. Edward had begun to feel that Carlisle was protecting him, and after seeing how tortured Jasper was he knew that things couldn't possibly be the way that Carlisle had said they were. In the end, Edward left Carlisle to explore the world for himself by himself.

For some time Edward looked for others of his kind. He saw vampires waste away before him, ashamed of who they were. Some some who weren't so ashamed of who they were and
relished in the screams and agony of their victims, like Elliot did. He watched all of this from afar until one day he couldn't help himself any more and decided to take action.

Edward tried to save the victim of a masochistic vampire and was immediately shunned by the victim. It was just as Bella had said. He had been called a monster and everything else you can think of. It made him confused, scared, doubtful, and even angry.
Was he really a monster? Could monsters be happy? Do monsters get to go to Heaven? Does God care for or love monsters like He does humans? The answer that he got from a homeless bitter old man who was dying in an alley one day gave him the answers he had expected.

There was no salvation for any monster. No God for anyone but humans. Monsters are only

meant to exist.
And if God can't love a monster, then no one can...A monster can only love another monster and nothing else.

There's probably nothing worse in the world than to find out you're monster forever, even after death. That there was only existing and anything beyond that would be to join the ranks of the vampires who liked to slaughter the innocent. T
here was nothing more...nothing less.

In the end he decided that the best chance he could have at a decent existence was one with Carlisle. With this in mind,
resigned to his fate, he started to make his way back to Jackson. (note: by this time Jasper and Alice had already left to be alone with themselves)

Thursday, April 12, 2007

MM ch14 An@Lysis-->

Anyway throughout this whole chapter things are just getting tied up. Edward and Carlisle are heading off in different directions. Carlisle has already started on a trip away from Biloxi as he moves towards Columbus over in Ohio. He’s going on a trip and bringing Edward with him. And for a while Edward is going to go on his own to find himself, he’ll tell Carlisle. So we won’t be seeing him in the last chapter. This is his goodbye chapter right here. Since we all love Edward so very much lol.

Edward has started thinking and Alice feels a sort of sadness towards him because this is the last time that she’ll see the innocent playful Edward for a long time before Bella changes him again. The next time that she sees him he has already become the Edward we all know in Twilight. He went away from Carlisle after Carlisle found Esme and something happened to kill something inside him. I know right now that there’s a whole story behind how became this way but I can’t figure it out so we might not know. All I can say about it is that I think Edward may have gotten into an argument with Carlisle after they ended up leaving Alice back in Biloxi. But he ended up leaving Carlisle either way. Maybe i'll put another post on this after.

So it goes along, we see what’s happened to Adrian and you can sort of see how sad it is that he’s been manipulated this whole time. A lot of people didn’t like Adrian but in the end it turns out he was just a victim in the story. Since that much is obvious, I won’t tell you everything else about what will happen with Adrian. The last will tell you what happened to many of the other chapters, so you’ll find out shortly. About Maria (duh with Elliot) and everyone else.

So the name of the chapter is pieces. Mainly refers to how Alice keeps seeing pieces of the future happening before her and the emotions that she can feel in those visions are so strong and full of hate and anger that it hurts her. Other pieces include her usual life falling apart because of such drastic change and Adrian’s life. His past and his present. Alice’s emotional condition and Adrian’s too (see: fall to pieces?) There are so many different meanings to it all. So many different meanings. But in the end all you can do is put things back together bit by bit.

Finally I took the meaning of words. Adrian was betrayed by words but throughout this whole story Alice has felt how Jasper feels because his feelings are in the air. You can comment that people don’t say it in words that they love you, but a lot of times those three words can be shown in other ways other than words. Other ways like through the person’s eyes that they love you. Words can be misconstrued and twisted like they were with Adrian. But the eyes are the windows to someone’s soul. Alice and Jasper can see their love for each other through the other’s eyes and feel how powerful it is in the atmosphere. That’s how they know how much they truly mean to each other. That’s my meaning for Jasper and Alice’s reunion in the airport towards the end of New Moon when they came back from seeing the Volturi. True soul mates can read and communicate their love to each other in just one look.

Saturday, January 27, 2007

G0ry M@ry-->

H mmm this one doesnt really connect with the storyline but i found this picture of a girl on Deviantart and figured id show it on here. it's pretty gory and sorta twisted so if you dont have the stomach for that kinna thing maybe you shouldnt look at it lol. either way i might as well put it on here. it's a girl who is all bloody with red hair. kinna reminded me of Maria a bit but i guess more so of that girl from BloodRayne. very vampiric. here


Thursday, January 25, 2007

HiNts and CLues-->

It's been a while since I've posted the last chapter but not as long as it SEEMS lol. you guys are so impatient for my to update that i totally love it (how twisted it that? >.<)! so i've been getting that a lot of people didn't expect that Mary-Lynn=Maria. i didn't really look at the description of Maria on the Lexicon so chances are if she's described on there i might have thrown you all off lol. A red haired seductress is just how i see her. I'm just surprised that no one would have expected her to pop into the story. she's a huge part of Jasper's history right? but that's good. ^_^ also a little note: im surprised that you didnt catch some of the other hints from Twilight that i've dropped into the story. or maybe no one has pointed them out in the reviews. did you guys see anything?

but anyway i was staying up all night and i figured that NOW i can HAPPILY announce that the outline to the REST of the rest of the story is now COMPLETE! Wh00h000!!!! :D im so happy about knowing how im going to get to the end that im on cloud9! it's been bugging me for the longest time that i dont know what's going to happen. i just gotta write it all out. I dont know how much more tragic Alice's story is than Bella, but *shrug* i hope that you like how it all ends out. so just hold on! im putting the final touches on the next chapter and it should be out within the next week or so. maybe even this week, depending.

Monday, January 01, 2007

C0ming to n End-->

It really has been some time since I've written. I mean for a while the ending plot sorta threw me. I know how I want this story to end but I don't know how to get there. Damn I shoulda stuck to my draft lol! So basically I was milling around trying to write and coming up blank. Sorta put it off for a while and then when work started picking up for the holidays I started to put it off, forgetting to come back to it. Thank you guys so much for reminding me that I had some unfinished business to attend to ^.^

Then I came to the realization that the reason why I'm having a hard time coming up with an ending plot is because I was trying to draw out something that wasn't there. The story is almost complete and pretty soon we'll find out how Alice and Jasper's story ends. Basically people, the story is almost finished.

Yeah, the fic is almost done. Can you believe that? XD I think there are about 1-2 chapters left after the one I posted just now. It's sad to see it end but this one has been my most successful one so far and all good things must come to an end.